北京市2017年中考英语试题及答案(9)

　　

Dear Mrs. Smith, My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon. _____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua

　　【总体思路】

　　本篇写作的体裁属于应用文类留言条。在英文部分已经明确给出三个问题，这三个问题与今年一、二模大量考查的邀请信的问题类似，考生之前已经经过了充分的训练：

　　1. 我们准备去哪？

　　2. 我们做什么？

　　3. 何时回家，如何回家？

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Mrs. Smith,

　　My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon. We are going to have a trip to the Central Park, which enjoys great fame all over the world.

　　In the park, a variety of activities have been arranged. To begin with, we plan to walk around for about an hour to enjoy the wonderful scenery. And then, we are going to take a boat tour on the lake. After that, we will have dinner together in a restaurant near the Central Park.

　　It is cheap and convenient for me to take No.6 bus to go back home and I will get home at about 9:00p.m. Please don’t feel worried about me.

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文分析】

　　首先，提示问题为 “Where are you going?” 要明确写出外出的地点。在范文中，我们去的是美国一个很著名的地点“We are going to have a trip to the Central Park”，并用非限定性定语从句对这个地点进行补充说明“which enjoys great fame all over the world.”。

　　接着，提示问题为“What are you going to do?”具体写出我们到达外出地之后所进行的活动。在范文中，活动一为散步和欣赏美景“To begin with, we plan to walk around for about an hour to enjoy the wonderful scenery.”。活动二为在湖上划船“And then, we are going to take a boat tour on the lake.”。活动三为一起吃晚餐“After that, we will have dinner together in a restaurant near the Central Park.”。

　　然后，第三个问题“When and how will you get home?”，需要写出回家的方式和到家的时间“It is cheap and convenient for me to take No.6 bus to go back home and I will get home at about 9:00 p.m.”。

　　最后，希望接待家庭的妈妈不要为我担心“Please don’t feel worried about me.”

　　题目②

　　宽容是一种美德。人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊。面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解，生活就会多一缕阳光。

　　某英文网站正在开展以“包容、谅解”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。

　　提示词语:hurt, realize, forgive (原谅), happy

　　提示问题:●What happened between you and him/her?

　　●Why did you decide to forgive him/her?

　　●How did you feel after forgiving him/her?

　　

I still remember what happened between _____________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【总体思路】

　　本篇写作体裁属于写事、写经历类话题，需要考生写出谅解他人的经历，具体内容围绕以下三个方面：

　　一、你们之间发生了什么事？

　　二、你为什么决定原谅他（她）？

　　三、谈谈你原谅他（她）之后的感受。

　　【参考范文】

　　As we are not born perfect, it’s normal for us to make mistakes in our daily life. For me, there is a story that I would never forget and in which I forgave my best friend Tom.

　　There was a time I was addicted to collecting stamps and I spent lots of time on it. After Tom learned about this, he secretly stole my stamps and threw them into the trash can. I was so angry with him and I decided not to talk with him for the rest of my life. However, my English teacher heard about this and asked us to come to the office to talk. She told us that we shouldn’t be mad at each other and an ideal relationship between friends should be the one filled with love, care and understanding. Finally, we agreed and hugged each other after he said sorry to me. I forgave what he did and understood him.

　　I felt a sense of relief after forgiving him. In my opinion, to build a healthy relationship, friends should become good listeners and advisers instead of keeping silent after meeting with problems.

　　【参考范文分析】

　　本篇为叙事类作文，考生需要从三个方面作答，指出原谅对方的一件事情，原谅的原因以及原谅之后的感受。

　　第一段首先指出原谅的对象，“For me, there is a story that I would never forget and in which I forgave my closest friend Tom.”

　　接着第二段，详细描述发生的事情，先指出矛盾点，“There was a time I was addicted to collecting stamps and I spent lots of time on it. After Tom learned about this, he secretly stole my stamps and threw them into the trash can.” 然后，描述转折点，是因为老师的帮助，我们的关系才发生的改变，“However, my English teacher heard about this and asked us to come to the office to talk. She told us that we shouldn’t be mad at each other and an ideal relationship between friends should be the one filled with love，care and understanding.” 事情发展的最后，我原谅了朋友并拥抱和好，“Finally, we agreed and hugged each other after he said sorry to me. I forgave what he did and understood him.”

　　最后一段，描述自己的感受即可，“I felt a sense of relief after forgiving him.”。结尾部分进行总结，好的关系应该彼此多倾听，而不是冷战，“In my opinion, to build a healthy relationship, friends should become good listeners and advisers instead of keeping silent after meeting with problems.”